Pitch & Feedback

It was really interesting seeing how other people interpreted the brief , I thought the other groups pitches where really strong as they really thought about the narrative and the characters. Our group was the last to pitch, we started off by giving a brief synopsis of the drama, although still a little bit under developed I feel that the rest of the group really understood what we where trying to achieve with the piece. 

At this moment in time the character is also a little under developed, I think a couple of people found it hard to understand why this character had developed this phobia with out really knowing/understanding the character. WE all talked about different films that inspired us my main inspiration was Bunny and Bull which I have already talked about.

After we then got feedback from the rest of the group, they seemed to really like it although thought we needed to develop the Character a little more, which was understandable.  Alex then asked the question about music and what we would use as our sound track or would he play any instruments, for me this triggered a really powerful motif with in the film as at this point I never really thought about our character playing a instrument., this was an element that I was going to put into the scrip.

After our pitch we where all given group tutorials with Lee, where we talked through the idea in much more detail, we also talked about actors and possible location.  Lee gave us some great for us to improve the story but also the character.

it was clear that we had  strong idea although it still needed a little work especially in developing the character.