Friday 9 May 2014

Evaluation Documentary and Drama.

 I think the documentary and drama projects have been the most enjoyable out of the others. Ive learnt new skills, worked with people I wouldn’t have possible worked with and taken roles that that I might not have chosen, pushing me out of my comfort zone. Most off all I think I've gained confidence in expressing my ideas in a group of people where I don’t know everyone.

For our documentary we had to work in groups of six and that we had to film in Liverpool based on the theme of Liverpool stories. This was great as the brief allowed us to have lots of creative freedom. I was in a group with Alex Kentfield, Hannah Grencis, Saul Allerton, Alex Potter and Noah Chebouli. Our first idea was to look to graffiti and how it is betrayed in the media, is it art or is it vandalism. As Liverpool was the capital of culture we thought that they opinions of the art form might have changed. As a group I think we all preferred this idea but due to our lack of contact with any street artist we found it hard to plan and organise. As a continuous plan we started to develop our other idea, which focused around a music shop in the centre of Liverpool that has closed down. We thought it would be interesting to find out about the history of this shop and a great way to find out more about Liverpool’s rich music history. Just as we where about to make our final decision about what idea to chose, a street artist called Kerion   got in contact about a organisation that he runs in the centre of Liverpool. The organisation is called zapgraffiti, which provides a work studio for artist to do they work. This was great as it was really showing the art form in a positive way. We decided to focus our film around this company and the other contacts our producer Hannah had managed to get in contact with. Although we had loads of contacts I still wanted to get hold of a street artist who does it for the thrill and the art form.

In Liverpool we where very well organised, and everything went to plan as. When I Liverpool we decided to spilt up into two groups so we could cover more ground. Alex Kentfield, Hannah Grencis, Alex Potter and Noah Chebouli where the main group and the majority of the interviews while me Saul Allerton headed to the outer parts of Liverpool as we where told the art would be. As I was the sound editor I mainly just assisted people and helped out when ever I could.

I was really looking forward to doing the sound design, as sound is something I’m really interested in. I also loved the possibility of creating my own sound track although the director wanted to use someone else sound track. I was adamant that I could do it, as they where working on the main edit I started the soundtrack taking inspiration from Dark Shadows I wanted to create an upbeat sound track and use part of the interviews in the opening minute to help set up the narrative. For the soundtrack I used a free sample kit to start off with to get the core of the beat, when I had my next rehearsal I then took a zoom and recoded the individual part of the kit and played several different beats , but it wasn’t till the eidt I realised that beats just didn’t work and was very overpowering. I want back to my original idea of creating the beat from scarp but using the parts of the kit that I had recorded. As well as the soundtrack I focused on lining up the audio to the interviews in hindsight I should have done this before hand as the when I was given the rough edit the clapperboard had been cut out so I had no marker to line up the sound. I persevered and got the audio lined up and then began by creating the sound design by adding the sounds of the spray can, people walking and the other elements to give the film a rich and filled sound track.

The final edit was different to what I imagined, when we where in Liverpool we found loads of different organisation and people we where so passionate about street art we had to include everyone. In hindsight we should have just kept the documentary around two or three people max. The documentary just felt a but rushed as we had so much to say.  However I think we had created a great documentary, they are loads of films about street artist but I think we approached it in a different way. The footage look great and I felt the soundtrack really complemented the documentary.


Overall I think we worked very well in a group, I was given the chance to work with people that I possible wouldn’t have got to work with before which was great. I’m happy with the final piece even though some improvements could have been made, especially in the sound design. I focused so much on the sound track I had to rush the sound design part and I felt like I did let the team down a little bit. I think we should be proud of what we have produced as it was the first documentary me and some of the others had never created a documentary before. I felt the feedback we received where fair, although I felt a little let down when our director criticised the film as up to this point he had never raised any concerns.

For the drama I was contacted by a couple of groups asking if I could do the sound for they drama, I was privileged that I was asked but as I had already done sound design for the documentary I wasn’t allowed to do the same job role. Also Hannah and me had already came up with a great idea which I really wanted to be part of.  We started to construct a team and really started to develop the idea, however this was jeopardised as Hannah and me had already worked together and apparently in the brief it said that we weren’t allowed. When we found out everyone had already sorted groups and we decided to speak to Debbie about it, this was quite reassuring and we decided that we would stick together, although Hannah and i would lose marks on studentship.
           
Hannah and I pitched our idea to the rest of the team in our first meeting. The film would be focused around one character who suffers from agoraphobia. The character would have no dialogue and as the audience we are never told why he sufferers from this phobia.  As it was partly my idea I really want to be director as I had clear vision of how I want the film to look. Luckily the rest of group was happy for me to be director, which was great. 

Before writing the scrip I did some research about the phobia and how it affects people, I was surprised to find out that the phobia was much more then just the fear of the outside. People who suffer from the phobia get very obsessive about certain items that remind them of the past, as it is a way for them to connect with the outside world. I really like this idea of having certain motifs that feature throughout the film. It wasn’t until I started to write the script that the narrative became clear. The film would be focuses on one character called George on what should be on of the happiest days of the year his birthday. I really wanted to stay away from been cliché, no flash backs or anything like that, I didn’t want the camera or the character to leave the room. I wrote the scrip having an older actor to play the role, but I knew it would be quite difficult to find. After not having much look with on the facebook groups, me and the producer created a casting call on a website called Star Now, I was little bit sceptical as we didn’t have a full scrip, still undecided about location and we couldn’t pay actor for they time. Luckily we had an actor contact us called Jonathan who used to suffer from panic attacks we met up with him and gave him scrip. He told us about his acting career and his experience with panic attacks. I was very happy with the actor and felt like he would put his own personal twist on the scrip.


We managed to get an ideal location in Sheffield Wood Hill Grange Flat. The room we had was a blank canvas and had very little furniture. The room was quite small but it was much better idea then going to Halifax and shooting. We had the room for 3 days, the first day we did the set design and the other two days where for filming. The set design went pretty smoothly as we created a props list of what we wanted and who was bringing which item.  We started changing the layout, moving the furniture and changing the bed sheets before we started add the miscellaneous items, pictures, posters. As we where shooting the second half of the scrip first we had to make the room messy although its looks a random it was actually quite orgainsed.  I was a little bit nervous about our first day filming, as I had never directed a film of this scale. We met Jonathan at the location and briefed him before we started filming. As the room wasn’t quite ready I decided to shoot the shoots of the outside first in a near by woods, this gave us time to get to know Jonathan and his background which made it easier to direct as we where building up this relationship.  The first day of filming went pretty smoothly to be honest, the only problem we had was the point of view of shots, they just didn’t look right and as it was going dark we decide to film them again on the second day.  As before we met Jonathan at the location, we told him to shave and bring his suit, which he did. I felt that the second day of filming went quite went well and us as a team where much more efficient. The scene where Jonathan breaks down and has his panic attack I was especially pleased with. Once again we tried to film the Point Of View shots although they where better then yesterday I still thought they didn’t work.


Jonathan was great to work with he was a great actor and was very easy to work with. I thought he really played the role well. The edit was quite difficult as after the rough cut we had an 8 minute film, I found it hard to cut scenes which wouldn’t affect the narrative of the film. The first half of the film we set a pace with and it was a shame that couldn’t keep that same pace throughout the film. I was very concerned that the more footage we cut the more of the narrative we where loosing. I tried to show the film to as many people as possible although not all of them understood the motif in the film they understood the key concept of the film. This was very reassuring as I think we were all worried about this. Overall I’m very pleased with our final piece, the footage looks great and the sound really complements the film. As a team I think we have all worked really well together, although I do think some members made a little more effort. It was great directing and I really enjoyed it as got to see my idea get turned into a film.  

Tuesday 6 May 2014

Final Edit

For the final edit we made the improvements that Neil told us to make, by getting rid of the shot from outside and holding the shots of Jonathan face for longer. I was really happy with the edit and how it turned out, although we had to change it from the original scrip.  The first half of the film is great I wanted to keep that pace for the rest of the film but due to the time restriction’s I felt that the second half is a little rushed, this isn’t the editor fault but mine of making the scrip too long.

In the sound edit we had a couple of problems as pro tools didn’t work on lots of the computers, the sound waves wouldn’t show up and as we where editing sound that made a really small waveform it was hard to edit and line the in synch sound up with the footage. Considering Adam had never used Pro Tool before I thought he did a great job of editing the sound and had some creative ideas of how we could bring the outside sounds in.


Overall I’m very happy with the final edit, we had a couple of problems on the way but we managed to get over them.

Thursday 1 May 2014

Tutorial

How tutorial with Lee was very helpful, as we had a rough edit to show him and was quite excited to see what he thought about it. We had some concerns about the narrative and if it made sense that we also wanted to discuss with him.

We started by showing Lee and Neil, another tutor who was also in the room, the final edit and a rough version of the sound design.it was really helpful to get feedback from Neil as he hadn’t seen the film before and didn’t know any of the theme or concepts. He gave us some really helpful ideas about how to improve the edit by getting rid of certain shots and also holding the shots of the face for longer. It was great to see that he understood the film as this was something we where all worried about as we had to cut a lot of the footage.  We then discussed the plans for the sound design and about bring the outside sounds in and exploring the idea of headspace.


The tutorial was really reassuring and we all came away feeling quite positive about the film and how we could improve it.

Monday 28 April 2014

Edit

For the edit I sat down with Sarah and looked through the footage and looking at what angles we liked best.  As Sarah was editing the holiday’s I wasn’t there for a couple of days while she was editing but told her just to follow the scrip and put everything in order.

When I got back was very impressed with what I saw, although it was still a rough edit the footage looked great and I felt the narrative came across quite well. However the film was over 8 minutes at this point and felt that the more footage we cut the more of the narrative we where losing. I sat down with the scrip and tried to workout what parts we could cut without losing any of the narrative.  One scene we had to cut was the scene where things slowly change in the frame, I really like this part of the scrip and was key to the narrative but it didn’t turn out the way we wanted it to. We messed around with this scene but in the end we decided just to cut it out of the film.

This saved us a couple of minutes but we where still about 1 or so minutes over the 5-minute limit. Sarah began to cut the footage and made the transitions between clips seamless. We had an edit that we where both happy with and showed it to the rest of the group they all seemed to like. The final step was color correcting the footage.


I was very happy with the edit and how it turned out, although I do think some off the narrative aspects might have been lost due to the five minute brief!

Sound Design

For the sound design I really wanted to keep things very minimalistic and really let the shots speak for themselves. As I didn’t want the camera to leave the room I really wanted to explore around this idea of bringing the outside in. Looking at 2001 space odyssey I love the way they slowly bought the outside sounds in to the room with out the audience really knowing this is something that I really wanted to create with in the sound design.

Throughout A View I want things to quite normal and just have in synch sounds, as he gets closer and closer to his panic attack I want the sounds to build up, creating tension, before we cut to silence as he reaches the door!! For the rest of the film I would like to slowly bring more and more outside in to the mix.Looking at song called Holy Innocent by The Crookes I love the piano in the intro and think it would work really well with the film.  Although I really like the sound of the piano I don’t want to make the film cliché. If we have time to create a soundtrack we will explore the possibility’s and experiment but the sound design is our main focus.  

Thursday 24 April 2014

Day 3- Second Day Filming

As we did before we arrived at Wood Hill nursing home at 9:30 am, when we had got they we where surprised to see that Jonathan had already arrived, this wasn’t an issue as it meant I could brief the crew and Jonathan together saving us a little bit of time.

We had a lot less to film, which meant we could spend a little bit more time on certain shots and re film the point of view shots from yesterday which didn’t turn out too great.  The first shot we filmed was at the started, where we see Jonathan getting out of bed and walking over to the curtains. This shot was a little difficult due to the lighting outside as it kept on changing meaning when he opened the curtains the footage was over or under exposed. We spent a little longer on this shot then I expected but it was worth it in the end as the shoot look really nice.

We swift moved on t the next shot filmed inside the cupboard, as Jonathan reached in to grab his shirt. This had to be one of my favourite shots we filmed, the composition is great and it foreshadows what’s going to happen later on in the film. Everything was running smoothly and we decided to take a break before we filmed the most crucial part of the film, the panic attack. I not going to lie I was a little nervous about this as it was the most important scene in the film, and I wasn’t quite sure what to say to Jonathan as I knew he used to suffer from them.

Before we started filming I quickly briefed Jonathan and told him where abouts to stand and to look. We filmed a shot before where Jonathan looks straight through the camera, I wanted the composition to be the same as this shot. As it was quite a sensitive scene we thought it would be best if we had as little of us in the room as possible, so Louis Adam and Sarah went into another room. Jonathan asked if he could have a little bit of time to get into character but just to start recording. It was a little uncomfortable to watch him act this scene as he start to cry and I didn’t know when to call cut, the footage look really really good Jonathan acting was brilliant you could really see the emotion and pain on his face. After this scene we had another break and talked about how we where going to film the point of view shots as we all agreed that they didn’t work.

I didn’t want to give up on the point of view shot as it was really important and a crucial part of the scrip. We had already got rid of two point of shots and replaced then with cut always. We had a similar set up as the day before. Although the footage looked better then yesterday it still didn’t look the way I wanted it to. We talked about filming the shot from outside looking through the window but what made our film unique was that it was all shot inside the same room.  We tried the shot one more time, although not perfect it still better then the other attempts.

Overall I think filming went very well, Jonathan was great he was really cooperative, patient and played the role very well. I think as a team we work well together and the footage looks really good.