How tutorial with Lee was very helpful, as we had a rough
edit to show him and was quite excited to see what he thought about it. We had
some concerns about the narrative and if it made sense that we also wanted to
discuss with him.
We started by showing Lee and Neil, another tutor who was
also in the room, the final edit and a rough version of the sound design.it was
really helpful to get feedback from Neil as he hadn’t seen the film before and didn’t
know any of the theme or concepts. He gave us some really helpful ideas about
how to improve the edit by getting rid of certain shots and also holding the
shots of the face for longer. It was great to see that he understood the film
as this was something we where all worried about as we had to cut a lot of the
footage. We then discussed the plans for
the sound design and about bring the outside sounds in and exploring the idea
of headspace.
The tutorial was really reassuring and we all came away
feeling quite positive about the film and how we could improve it.
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